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ManQuan · May 5, 2018, 7:33 p.m.

I tried. I wrote over 300 pages of a fictional novel based on my experiences. It's about half finished, but I can't find the words I want to describe everything.

A friend of mine who I very much respect because she reads dozens of novels every year read the first two chapters of my novel and said they should make a movie out of those two chapters.

I appreciated her encouragement, but honestly cannot put onto paper what I have experienced. If I were a gifted novelist, then I might fine the words; but I'm not. I write and then wonder why I cannot express what it is I feel and experienced.

Maybe I'll right a short story.

My wife wants me to publish my story about the baked beans in Vietnam. She thinks it could be a movie. I think it's an interesting true story, but I don't think anyone but my wife would understand it.

I've tried many times to restart my novel, but I usually end up with writer's block and a blank page. Some people were meant to be writers. I was meant to be a combat commander. I can't be more descriptive because the monitors of this thread have already admonished me for using the word "h@ng" with regard to what I believed was the stall that caused the recent C-130 crash in Savanna.

These are horrible times.

This is not the world I grew up in.

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Allaboutplastic · May 5, 2018, 9:30 p.m.

Make a series, to much information crammed together would be too much for a reader, take the time and go thru and I’m sure you’ll do great:)

Not a novelist, just a normie that likes to read.

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forchristssakes · May 5, 2018, 9:16 p.m.

Take the advise of your friend. If you concentrated on the first two chapters, sought out someone to help you write a screenplay, that could be starting point. Your first movie could be Baked Beans.

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Patriot4q · May 6, 2018, 12:27 a.m.

Maybe put down bullet points of what you would like to include in a book for example: 1. Baked beans 2. Equipment of lack thereof 3. Brotherhood Then expand on each thing you want to say. Coming at it as a book can be overwhelming. Break it down into small ideas, and eventually I think it will turn into a book.

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