honestly anon, some of those edits are major
not sure if they would be better or worse, gotta really look through them.
you don't usually put a thesis in the first paragraph at the end of it.
I really wouldn't want to completely change this to add a globalist feel to it, "If America falls the world falls"
let me look at this carefully, for example, I wouldn't want to break up POTUS' slogan like that, doesn't make sense to me
give me a while to look at these omissions/adaptions