Anonymous ID: 90d7a2 Aug. 19, 2018, 10:18 a.m. No.2667195   🗄️.is 🔗kun   >>7260 >>7472

>>2664471

honestly anon, some of those edits are major

not sure if they would be better or worse, gotta really look through them.

you don't usually put a thesis in the first paragraph at the end of it.

I really wouldn't want to completely change this to add a globalist feel to it, "If America falls the world falls"

let me look at this carefully, for example, I wouldn't want to break up POTUS' slogan like that, doesn't make sense to me

 

give me a while to look at these omissions/adaptions

Anonymous ID: 90d7a2 Aug. 19, 2018, 7:52 p.m. No.2673390   🗄️.is 🔗kun

the baker needs a handoff in general, if the BO/BV checks me and lets me, I'll try to do some editing

if another baker shows up, I'll be doing edits all night

Anonymous ID: 90d7a2 Aug. 20, 2018, 7:39 p.m. No.2684598   🗄️.is 🔗kun

I'm editing now, start from the first PDF

I'm going to do all the grammatical stuff first, then see what content edits should be made

Anonymous ID: 90d7a2 Aug. 20, 2018, 8:28 p.m. No.2685050   🗄️.is 🔗kun

kek anon, I was fucking with one shill, and that shill and some other think I'm hopping to another anon because that anon is fucking with the shill too

pretty funny

 

kek, I'm really not dbfc6c

Anonymous ID: 90d7a2 Aug. 20, 2018, 9:36 p.m. No.2685570   🗄️.is 🔗kun   >>0350 >>4860 >>5461

wanted to do this step by step, so I did mostly the grammatical errors plus a few content revisions

updated pdf

updated pastebin:

https://pastebin.com/d0jHVcY9

 

will see which content revision should be done tomorrow