Anonymous ID: e5691d Aug. 7, 2018, 3:04 a.m. No.2494312   🗄️.is 🔗kun   >>5674

Hi there,

 

I'm afraid this edit is based on one of the earlier versions. Also I forgot to turn on Track Changes when I edited in Word (or else I could have run a Compare Documents on the whole thing and then made a PDF showing the changes). Sorry about this. I usually have routines for doing this sort of work, but this was something of an exceptional case. Still, if you read this against the current version, you might find some suggestions of interest. And if you would like me to do a run-through of any later version, just let me know.

Anonymous ID: e5691d Aug. 7, 2018, 4:01 p.m. No.2501720   🗄️.is 🔗kun   >>2156

>>2499587

 

Looking good, anon. I'll just give this a quick read through for minor errors/typos:

 

Page 1, para 2, line 12: change 'seems' to 'seem' (since elsewhere mainstream media is treated as plural noun)

 

Page 3, para 1, line 1: Either 'there are hints as to…' or 'there have been hints as to…'.

 

Page 3, para 2, line 4: 'various unconfirmed theories REGARDING (or something similar) the meaning of…'.

 

Page 3, para 2, line 7: 'not only does Q work for President Trump, but ALSO that Q is a team'

 

Page 3, para 3, line 4: 'pictures that POINT…'.

 

Page 4, para 4, line 19: 'to enable those who are interested TO research…' or ''SO THAT those who are interested can research…'

 

Page 6, para 1, lines 6-8: 'These phrases signal - not just to the anons that decode, research, and spread the crumbs, but TO the public as well - THAT we can help….'

 

Minor points really, but you've done such a great job here, anon, and I think that minor errors such as these should not be allowed to detract from that by remaining in the final document. Well done! And on behalf of the many people who are going to appreciate this (and those that already do), thanks again!

Anonymous ID: e5691d Aug. 23, 2018, 6:28 p.m. No.2717985   🗄️.is 🔗kun   >>8709 >>9094

I haven't been able to work on it for a bit, I'll try to get to some edits tonight

some of the added wording might be unnecessary like the diversity stuff (many anons hate that word)