Cee ID: 7c6074 July 6, 2020, 9:13 a.m. No.2189   🗄️.is 🔗kun   >>2197

>>2138

This longish article/editorial is fantastic. IMO. Thanks for the pastebin.

 

Wow, stunning article. The Anti-American Movements Are Communist, not Black by John Cleer

https://pastebin.com/DTrbZJeL

 

Publishable IMO as soon as you finish the endnotes (references) section and fixes a couple of typos.

 

Check this sentence. Is the POTUS quote accurate? Looks ungrammatical.

>“Against every law of society and nature,” President Trump continued, “our children are taught in school to hate their own country, and to believe that the men and women who built it were not heroes, but that were villains.”

 

fix Way of life→

We will expose this dangerous movement, protect our nation’s children, end this radical assault, and preserve our beloved American way of live.”

 

Fix change it's to its

>the National Geographic is proposing that some part of America will be able to fight it’s way to independence.

 

There are a couple of double or triple spaces; check for those.

 

Do you want to add anything on the corpoate donations to BLM or is that out of scope, too much for this article?

Do you want to add about the mob pulling down the statue of black abolitionist Frederick Douglas in Rochester, NY last nigh?

 

Might want to use m-dashes—like this one—instead of n-dashes where appropriate.

I'm not going to edit this one for you (unless you ask me to). You have done an awesome job and are a skilled writer not needing editorial help.

AWESOME WORK, John Cleer.

Truth Seeker ID: 7c6074 July 6, 2020, 9:21 a.m. No.2191   🗄️.is 🔗kun   >>2193 >>2197

>>2174

So this entire post, >>2174, is the proposed Editorial? If we copypasta it, which part(s) are we supposed to take, all?

 

The post struck me as thoughtful and addressed the points, but I did not realize it was an Editorial. (Sorry).