Thanks. Found a couple typos. Will wait for additional feedback.
lapdogs not laptops, kek
sativa, indica, or hybrid? kek Perhaps I'll joint you.
Let me think on this. 3 wildly different opinions from 3 anons (one at home didn't much like it).
Personal critique: My intro was weak and not a grabber. Some rough sentences due to trimming verbiage to stay near 500 words.
I'm not opposed to a jointly authored article. If you are right, ]you[ should not hesitate to write.