good rundown
gripping read
Some recommended edits:
>direct quotes like the 1st and 3rd Paragraphs should be in quotations since they are verbatim. Or the haters will say we're plagiarizing. Block quotes look nice in WP.
>second paragraph shouldn't repeat their names again since you just told us in the first
>nytimes then wikileaks references need to be sourced
Can't read further until tomorrow but it's a cool timeline to put together. For me it wasn't clear reading just the beginning, Is this mostly a collection of quotes like my last op-ed or is it mostly original writing? More Quotations and references would clear the confusion I think.