Anonymous ID: 9af3bc Sept. 6, 2020, 5:11 a.m. No.10545536   ๐Ÿ—„๏ธ.is ๐Ÿ”—kun   >>5570

>>10545521

Your sentence construction is appalling.

Your use of "It" obfuscates the subject "mail in voting".

You say something isn't good enough for Iraqis and then announce "It" isn't going to happen forโ€ฆ.

 

Its a hodge podge of poor grammar, shit sentence construction and non-specific subject references.

While a reader can contrive to work out what you are trying to say, the text doesn't say it.

Anonymous ID: 9af3bc Sept. 6, 2020, 5:17 a.m. No.10545553   ๐Ÿ—„๏ธ.is ๐Ÿ”—kun   >>5567 >>5579

>>10545531

>WORLD CITIZENS, REMEMBER WHEN YOU WATCHED HUNDREDS OF THOUSANDS OF U.S. MILITARY TROOPS, SUCH AS MYSELF, SECURE THE NATIONAL ELECTIONS OF AFGHANISTAN AND IRAQI WITH OUR LIVES? ONE PERSON, ONE VOTE WAS THE MISSION. WHY HAS THE MOST SACRED PUBLIC DUTY OF U.S. CITIZENS CHANGED TO MAIL IN VOTING? IF IT IS NOT ACCEPTABLE ABROAD, THEN IT CAN NEVER BE ACCEPTABLE FOR WE THE PEOPLE OF THE UNITED STATES.

 

If you are sincere - Try that, more punchy and very specific.