what if, while we are watching, biden turns into a cartoon because we took too much? (took too much what?) and then he goes all (and this is a story direction for an actor in a part) he goes all "crush kill destroy" like a broken robot?
and we try to go to sleep and say 'oh no, this is not real, I took too much ' . . .
and when it all wears off, you just don't remember.
Trump is president again?
does someone then say 'OMG, you've been in a coma for 4 years'?
It always puzzled me about things in a bout.
I was like 'did they really kill . . . all those people?'
but you learn more.
trap doors in the floor.
I'm thinking 'ya, no.'
but I'm not sure.
you know in your story you got a lot of causulties.
it's kind of a grissly ending.
I'd end a story with troops with them all going home to their families, after the event.
if I were writing about young people with a sense of duty, I wouldn't write in a narratior who has them all fall in die in pointless spurges of violence.
pagents like that are passse.
the places that they happened are turned into pastures, or sometimes into memorials. and sometimes back into tourist places . . .