This is good. May I make two suggestions?
the weight of the subject of the interaction is only understood when comparing it too the dog not barking. They are ignoring the casket of GHWB. Something to bring attention to this narrative should be noted on each frame for emphasis. I like tables, but that's me.
Also reference video in image. hengus montebank presents had a good one but i think it's no longer on ytoob.