Anonymous ID: a62dd3 Dec. 20, 2021, 6:51 p.m. No.15228501   🗄️.is 🔗kun   >>8538

>>15228423

You need to work on your meter. Just because the last word rhymes doesn't make it poetry.

 

Think Haiku…5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables.

 

Each couplet should have the same syllables