Anonymous ID: 230f3b June 26, 2018, 9:10 a.m. No.1910756   🗄️.is 🔗kun   >>0761 >>0792 >>1050

>>1910661

>>1909257

 

>This video is extremely depressing. Had exactlty the oppsite if its intended effect on me.

 

Surely that is the odd, distorted voice. That actually detracts from the narrative, images and overall message. A new narration track would improve it a good deal.

 

Video maker, I am not alone -- the voiceover needs radical improvement.

Anonymous ID: 230f3b June 26, 2018, 9:18 a.m. No.1910830   🗄️.is 🔗kun   >>0889

>>1910761

I understand there is reasonable disagreement, so hear me out.

 

Good narration never detracts from the message. The subject video uses a breathy, pained, non-executive voice. It is noticeable and uncomfortable for the listener, therefore it detracts rather than enhances.

Anonymous ID: 230f3b June 26, 2018, 9:23 a.m. No.1910871   🗄️.is 🔗kun

>>1910792

>misspelling

I totally missed that as I was too distracted by the horrible narration.

 

kek

 

Videomaker, please understand our comments are constructive b/c the video is, largely, very good and we think it can be great with some adjustments.