https://truthsocial.com/@DanScavino/posts/110901859384836379
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>I'm not a good musician, but I like to write lyrics. Here are some lyrics I would like to hear sung:
>''Now there's nowhere where life is made fair
>There's no more justice, just endless lawfare
>And I can see how some would want to see some
>Heads hanged, and not hung in despair''
Lyric critique:
1) too overstated
"nowhere"… are you sure about that?
2) too abstract
Say the same thing, but make it concrete and personal.
3) too evasive
"And I can see"…
I can see that YOU DO want to see hangings!
Well NO SHIT!
Why not just SAY IT?