Anonymous ID: 851e6e July 3, 2018, 6:33 a.m. No.2010907   🗄️.is 🔗kun   >>0952

>>2010438

>>2010287

 

Can I make a couple of suggestions for edits?

 

1) The wording of "What if the corrupt media wanted to stop it …" is ambiguous. The object - "it" - could refer to either the plan or those others things just mentioned (corruption, wars, etc.).

 

Simple edit:

 

Change: "What if the corrupt media wanted to stop it …"

 

To: "What if the corrupt media wanted to stop that plan …"

 

2) In the paragraph after "It's happening" you might consider changing "what's really happening with your government" to "what's really happening with our government". Where THE PEOPLE are concerned, there is no US vs YOU. It should really be OUR. WWG1WGA, remember?