honestly anon, some of those edits are major
not sure if they would be better or worse, gotta really look through them.
you don't usually put a thesis in the first paragraph at the end of it.
I really wouldn't want to completely change this to add a globalist feel to it, "If America falls the world falls"
let me look at this carefully, for example, I wouldn't want to break up POTUS' slogan like that, doesn't make sense to me
give me a while to look at these omissions/adaptions
the baker needs a handoff in general, if the BO/BV checks me and lets me, I'll try to do some editing
if another baker shows up, I'll be doing edits all night
this one has all the edits in the previous two pdfs right????
understood anon, a family member had that, I feel for you
I am baking, so we'll get this done tomorrow (might be able to do some)
get well soon anon
I'm editing now, start from the first PDF
I'm going to do all the grammatical stuff first, then see what content edits should be made
kek "happenings" is actually a word, looked it up when writing, it actually doesn't need quotations
I thought it was funny
I think I'll just post the RDpdf and the pastabin, will make the pics later
kek anon, I was fucking with one shill, and that shill and some other think I'm hopping to another anon because that anon is fucking with the shill too
pretty funny
kek, I'm really not dbfc6c
wanted to do this step by step, so I did mostly the grammatical errors plus a few content revisions
updated pdf
updated pastebin:
https://pastebin.com/d0jHVcY9
will see which content revision should be done tomorrow