PDF attached of Edits and Revisions to Paragraphs 1 & 2.
Will continue.
I wondered about October 27th. I thought Q's first post was October 28th. But I am just focusing on revision and edits. Not gonna argue about dates. Also, be assured your work is very well written. Don't take my edits and revisions as criticisms. It's what I do for a living and all good writers subject their work to editors. It's brave of you to do so.
Here ya go, Anon. I could've done that soooo much faster if it was in Word. But it is what it is. Good job! and Good Night! ; )
Here you go, fren. Also attached is the copy I proofread as posted from general bread #3139 tonight 8/6/18.
don't rush honey i am burnt for the night anyway just gonna browse a bit over on general and probably fall asleep and have bad dreams or good depending which post i fall asleep to
aha, Clapper Sorry, fading fast
Hey there science Anon. Looking good and editor Anon above is spot on. You're almost there. Don't know anything about how to make a document of any sort non-traceable, but did read something here about how to edit out information on jpgs. The long and short of it is, I bet there is a tech-savvy anon on here somewhere who can help w/ that. Maybe META? Or war room? IDK…Keep us posted!
I'd say go for it but then I'm not the sharpest tool in the shed about that sort of thing.
Yea I think ultimately this could be done, perhaps a Q Basics abbreviated version. But science anon wrote this in a stream-of-consciousness manner and I think it has that same affect on the reader. I mean a stream of consciousness does seem to need to precede a Great Awakening. It also rather follows the style of muckrakers from days of yore. I say give it the final draft stamp and publish.
Okey dokey!