Anonymous ID: 93e316 Aug. 15, 2018, 10:07 p.m. No.2623280   🗄️.is 🔗kun

>>2623150

 

Looks good, Anon. I think it will have its place.

 

Couple quick editing notes:

 

  • space between police and officers in first paragraph on right

 

-fourth paragraph on right, 4th line: light is spelled ligt

 

-fourth paragraph on right, 6th line: Children / *adults

 

If that's your original work, well done and thank you. o7

 

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