Veteran off-duty Chicago police commander, 53, is fatally shot during an 'armed physical confrontation' with a robbery suspect

Off-duty police commander Paul Bauer was shot dead Tuesday afternoon in Chicago

The incident occurred after Bauer spotted a man who matched description of a robbery suspect and tried to track him down

It happened near the James R. Thompson Center, the state government office building

http:// www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-5387819/Off-duty-Chicago-police-officer-shot-downtown-building.html

Just finished this one,

>>371334

If i did not use the commas, i would have running/mixed sentence.

But i see what you mean with wait until arrests part. I fixed it.

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>>371394

i fixed these( added her full name, so she is not confused with chelsea clinton,kek)

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>>371475

https:// fellowshipoftheminds.com/2013/11/29/where-are-obamas-daughters-baby-pics-and-birth-records/

Last Sunday night, President-elect Barack Obama’s three closest friends — Valerie Jarrett, Martin Nesbitt and Dr. Eric Whitaker — sat down in the study of Mr. Nesbitt’s house in Chicago for one of their increasingly frequent heart-to-hearts.

http:// www.nytimes.com/2008/12/14/us/politics/14friends.html?pagewanted=2&_r=0