Just read that document as if it was an article a reporter submitted to an editor. There are simply too many errors for this to have originated in a high level government setting.
1) Incorrect capitalization of a noun in a sentence
2) Same phrase repeated within single sentence
3) Use of word "President" rather than "President's" in second graf
4) Incorrect placement of comma in third graf
5) Another incorrect use of comma in fourth graf, twice in same sentence, along with incorrect capitalization.