nice art work
but are you writing for anons and patriots,
or a red pill vehicle?
then it needs a stronger hook near the beginning.
Moroccan money transfers to CF? Benghazi. Fast and furious? Intel spying. an NSA control room watching it all?
what real event can you reveal to get the non woken reader wanting to know more
2cents
carefully crafted work is important, but dont take too long.
set a schedule and a target date and stick to it.
days turn to weeks, turn to months turn to years, and in the end you will have missed the train
good luck anon.
but as mag field weakens during re alignment, all those pesky space particles that now go to the poles go where then?
weather impact? ocean temp effect?