Anonymous ID: 3f389a March 5, 2018, 2:29 p.m. No.559737   ๐Ÿ—„๏ธ.is ๐Ÿ”—kun   >>9799

>>559670

>Thomas Jefferson pointed out in the Declaration of Independence, that #WeThePeople posses certain unalienable rightsโ€ which we were given by our Creator. These rights are inseparable from us: they are part of our humanity. Freedom of Speech is one of these rights, and is implicitly protected in the Bill of Rights.

 

1) "possess" is the correct spelling

2) You have an open or a close quote with no match

 

>Our rights to unlimited free speech include the right to excersize our rights on all public communications platforms, internet forums and/or (but not limited to) internet services.

 

1) "exercise" is the correct spelling

 

>1) #WeThePeople want to inform to the Government of the United States of America that our rights have been completely stripped by means of (but not limited to) terms of use, EULAs, service clauses or other contractual stipulations. Our collective voices have been banned, censored, limited, filtered and silenced.

 

>2) #WeThePeople ask of you, that you will force any providers of Internet service(s) and/or providers or Public Internet platforms to respect our Godgiven right to freedom of speech and expression, by means of heavy fines.

 

1) "God-given" should be hyphenated or just separated into two words, hyphenation being the preferred method.

2) This sentence probably needs no commas.

 

>3) #WeThePeople ask of you, that you force before mentioned providers to not limit the freedom of speech to people from other countries. How can we, in good conscience, can we argue that other humans beings have less human rights than we have?

 

1) "before mentioned" should be "aforementioned"

2) Awkward closing sentence. Try: "How can we, in good conscience, argue thatโ€ฆ"

3) Instead of "less human rights," "fewer human rights."

Anonymous ID: 3f389a March 5, 2018, 2:33 p.m. No.559759   ๐Ÿ—„๏ธ.is ๐Ÿ”—kun

>>559670

I missed this one:

>1) #WeThePeople want to inform to the Government of the United States of America that our rights have been completely stripped by means of (but not limited to) terms of use, EULAs, service clauses or other contractual stipulations. Our collective voices have been banned, censored, limited, filtered and silenced.

 

1) "want to inform to the" should be "want to inform the"

 

I'm a fan of the Oxford comma, but will not debate that here.

Anonymous ID: 3f389a March 5, 2018, 2:42 p.m. No.559811   ๐Ÿ—„๏ธ.is ๐Ÿ”—kun

>>559800

Nice dubz, Anon.

There's still a quotation mark here without an opening or closing quotation mark.

 

>Thomas Jefferson pointed out in the Declaration of Independence, that #WeThePeople posses certain unalienable rightsโ€ which we were given by our Creator. These rights are inseparable from us: they are part of our humanity. Freedom of Speech is one of these rights, and is implicitly protected in the Bill of Rights.

Anonymous ID: 3f389a March 5, 2018, 2:58 p.m. No.559897   ๐Ÿ—„๏ธ.is ๐Ÿ”—kun   >>9901 >>9908 >>9916

OK, Anons, I must admit I need help with finding a Fox News Live stream again. None of my YouTube searches bring back any sauce:

 

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