In the beginning there were dinosaurs, then . . . .
oh never mind.
I am not offended by the word PRAY, but this is no place for it. Nor is there any value to putting a Hashtag in a petition to the government. It diminishes your credibility.
#2 and #3 should start more like this . . .
We, the People of these United States DEMAND, that you as our elected officials . . .
Again telling them that you pray something is simply making a statement that requires no action on their part. The object here is to solicit action in no uncertain terms to correct the issues that are outlined.