Anonymous ID: e9d544 March 16, 2019, 2:37 p.m. No.5725055   ๐Ÿ—„๏ธ.is ๐Ÿ”—kun   >>5161

>>5725000

I'm too squeamish to look. I did try to take a quick look at the second half of the video. A bunch of lifeless bodies were lying on the floor in no pools of blood whatsoever. Then I couldn't take any more and stopped the video.

Anonymous ID: e9d544 March 16, 2019, 2:55 p.m. No.5725291   ๐Ÿ—„๏ธ.is ๐Ÿ”—kun   >>5314

>>5725219

I know I shouldn't help you improve your work, but I'm a hopelessly nice person, so I'll give you some pointers:

 

You need to work on blending in better, or no-one is going to take your shilling seriously. You need to stop glowing so obviously.