Ok Guys.
I over baked but i am learning.
I found the dough was quite clustered and the different line endings and beginnings hurt tidyanons eyes.
I cleared the spaces and used tabs. The downside is the dough looks messy but its fine here.
Future bakers may look here for the preview:
8ch.net/comms/res/258.html#261
There must be something missing because the latest dough i found was shorter than usual.
But if you want to work with it:
here is my cleaned dough if you want to use it:
pastebin.com/a9LqzRcX
Goodspeed