Anonymous ID: 71e87a June 13, 2019, 7:47 a.m. No.6741152   🗄️.is 🔗kun

>>6734278

Good concept. The text however is just about unreadable like a captcha (interference from background elements).

Consider remaking in a way that highlights the important text.

Anonymous ID: 71e87a June 13, 2019, 7:51 a.m. No.6741178   🗄️.is 🔗kun

>>6739628

Good concept, but the text although large Impact font is nearly unreadable over that background (like a captcha!) Suggest trying alternate layouts where the text can be placed over a plain backaground. Or try outlining text with black stroke.