It's a lot of words for a meme. (We always say 7 words or less……. I'm as much of an offender as anybody.)
That said, the text is excellent.
A wall of text in ALL CAPS IS HARD TO READ SEE WHAT I MEAN?
For longer text (like yours) – sentences instead of phrases – I really prefer mixed case because it's far more readable.
I think this meme concept has merit and potential.
Face on the left looking toward text on the right? An artfag made that suggestion to me once, and it makes sense in a way since we read from left to right. Easy to flip a layer so the face is looking to the right.
Godspeed patriot.
MF