I'm working on a short story and I wondered if anybody could give me any feedback or would like to discuss any of the elements in it. I'm just gonna drop some screens of what I have now and see if I get any replies.
Nancy Pelosi: "a hoax," and something that needs to disappear.
I'm a writer like my father before me.
But, really, I was walking my dog a couple hours ago and having a smoke. I live on a one-way, and I pictured these two characters and immediately had their names and started to develop some of their backstory.
I knew Milly had something to show/tell Billie, but I wasn't sure what it was until I got to writing that part. Thank God for an occasionally near-photographic memory. :)
I'm wondering how far into fantasy to take the next parts. Does Milly have a hunch or does she witness something? Maybe I'll go the supernatural/spiritual experience route.
I appreciate your feedback, and probably heed your advice after this.
Hopefully I will work it more soon.
Cool digits on your ID. No, 'Billie' is just how his mother must have spelled it, or how he decided to spell it when he was a young teenager. Honestly, I just like the awkwardness of the names:
>BIllie and Milly Marvis
But thanks for asking. It had occurred to me that it might seem feminine. I think I'll keep it anyway.
if you're Corne[y] signalling me, you got the wrong guy. Otherwise, I have no idea what you're after here. Sorry bout it.
>When POTUS talks about Ventilators, he's referring to us anons.