Anonymous ID: fbe771 April 30, 2020, 3:21 p.m. No.8978034   🗄️.is 🔗kun   >>8104

>>8976284

Interesting errors and style used in this post.

 

HOWEVER

 

We look at everything you write and try to analyze exactly why you wrote it the way that you did. So this is not a criticism but a way to further examine what you are trying to tell us.

 

If I were a proofreader…

 

(line 1) Here, the date is moving forward, not back, in time. Use "moving up" instead.

(line 2) Change strategic to strategy.

(line 3) Batter should be in lowercase.

(line 4) For scare quotes, use double quotation marks with punctuation set inside. **

(line 5) See rule for line 4.

(line 6) See rule for line 4.

(line 9) Use either America or Americans.

(line 11) Opponent's should be possessive, not plural.

(line 12) See rule for line 11.

(line 15) Why is China in upper case?

(line 16) "Constitutional" should not be capitalized in this sentence.

(line 17) "State Govs" should not be capitalized in this sentence.

(line 18) Close up space between the slash between tracing/privacy.

(line 21) For "companies" use plural, not possessive.

(line 23) See rule for line 4.

 

** Unless you are using British English style?