>Libs on twat
will reject the one with Bill Gates IMMEDIATELY out of hand.
Why?
"Lame Street Media" = instant turnoff
Different words, different approach:
Why haven't we seen this before?
or
Why isn't this in the nightly news?
Both of those imply they are known, but not being conveyed to the public, BUT no motive is imparted (it's not insulting - remember, they identify with that very media, consider them 'friendlies')
On the first one, New should not be capitalized, and maybe change it to:
Maybe there's a reason the new one is being pushed instead of the the existing one that is proven, cheap, and accessible.
Do you see what I mean?
They are both good, with little tweaking they will be great!
jmo, of course