>>9538304

Hory shit anon!

The Great Wall of text

Paste is already pointing out some errors.

Will start reading your novel draft and see what else is noticed.

Maybe succinct it some if time allows.

https://pastebin.com/CUFkFmdS

>>9538585

>>9538602

Fixed grammar (some) and run on paragraphs.

https://pastebin.com/ymiFsaXn

>>9538770

Already did anon

>>9538691

>>9538615

>>9538536

Fuck of InfoWhores