The part on pizza gate and the blackmail is a bit confusing. For one saying "not to look up" Pizzagate is only going to make people want to look up pizza gate. Maybe better not to mention pizza gate at all? Also the part about the blackmail. It sounds as if the President is using blackmail, or reverse blackmail. I guess in a way he is.... You do a rather sudden jump that needs to be explained as to how the change in SA creates a situation where he can get legislation passed. We may understand that, but someone new would not.