Izumi-san,
How do you evaluate my translation of your KOKOROE?
I am not sure whether my translation satisfies you or not.
And if it has qualified to your criteria,
I wish to transfer its management to you.
- 252 ： Mumumu ◆MUMUMUhnYI [sage] ： 2006/08/04 (木) 15:36:46 ID: ETNn4yPI
- >>251
Izumi-san,
How do you evaluate my translation of your KOKOROE?
I am not sure whether my translation satisfies you or not.
And if it has qualified to your criteria,
I wish to transfer its management to you. - 257 ： Mumumu ◆MUMUMUhnYI [sage] ： 2006/08/05 (金) 03:37:45 ID: ETNn4yPI
- Izumi-san,
Just I found some changes in your KOKOROE.
http://www.h4.dion.ne.jp/~eita/kokoroe.html
I will apply them to my English translation later.
And I have two wishes to you about your KOKOROE.
1) Please add version number and last modified date/time for clarification.
2) If you can, please notify all changes in this thread for notifying to Jim-san.
I think the quality of your KOKOROE is very good and bright, so,
I decided do masturbating. (>>228)
Regards, - 266 ： Mumumu ◆MUMUMUhnYI [be(912252);] ： 2006/08/05 (金) 14:09:59 ID: ETNn4yPI
- >>258-259
Thank you, Izumi-san.
I applied your changes in my English translation
and added the based version number of original document.
http://www.h4.dion.ne.jp/~eita/kokoroe.html (Izumi-san's original version, in Japanese)
http://mumumu.mu/bbspink/tao-of-deleters.txt (Translated version, in English)
Follows are differences from previous version:
@@ -58,4 +57,4 @@
- 2.8 The deleters must not receive any articles and money as a value
- of their deletions.
+ 2.8 The deleters must not receive any benefits as a value of their
+ deletions.
@@ -85,4 +84,5 @@
- 4.2 The deleters must confirm the contents of regular announcement
- by mailing list and in BBSPINK bulletin boards.
+ 4.2 The deleters must confirm the notifications before using their
+ competence that are noticed by mailing lists, BBSPINK bulletin
+ boards and other specified media.
Regards,