How many edits to get it to this?
I was particularly moved by the 'near end of life parents' and 'elderly woman in her 70's'.
It gave it a moar human edge, relatable even.
Red text makes it a bit shouty, you lost points for that.
>IT IS OVER, ACCEPT IT
This last part, you are missing one salient piece of information.
You don't get to decide when it's over.
I decide when for me, other anons decide when for themselves.
You wasted your time crafting this.
6/10