Anonymous ID: e0fb93 Jan. 15, 2021, 4:02 a.m. No.12530869   🗄️.is 🔗kun

>>12530815

How many edits to get it to this?

I was particularly moved by the 'near end of life parents' and 'elderly woman in her 70's'.

It gave it a moar human edge, relatable even.

Red text makes it a bit shouty, you lost points for that.

>IT IS OVER, ACCEPT IT

This last part, you are missing one salient piece of information.

You don't get to decide when it's over.

I decide when for me, other anons decide when for themselves.

You wasted your time crafting this.

6/10