IG Summary pp. 220-227
Strzok and Page played a role in revising Comey's HRC statement to "extremely careless."
The 6/7/16 draft deleted the statement that the "sheer volume of information classified as Secret supported an inference of gross negligence," replacing it by saying that the Secret info was "especially concerning because all of these emails were housed on servers not supported by full time staff." It also changed "reasonably likely" to "possible" about foreign actors accessing HRC's server.
Comey tried to deflect responsibility from himself regarding these changes, and danced all around trying to excuse them.
Comey's 6/12/16 draft used "extremely careless" and tried to explain/excuse why a "reasonable prosecutor" would not prosecute HRC.
Between 6/25/16 and 7/4/16, the statement was revised again to state that HRC used her personal server while on the territory of traditional adversaries, including talking to Obama. Then the Obama reference was dropped.
Comey claimed that the tarmac meeting "tipped the scales" in delivering his statement "separate and apart" from the Department. He worried, as did Strzok/Page in emails, that everything would "appear choreographed."
Comey told the OIG that he criticized HRC's uncharged conduct so that the American people would have confidence in the justice system.
Privacy Act compliance was an issue for Comey. He also cited Lerner at IRS not being charged as support for the HRC decision. "Poor judgment," they said.
The OIG found that Comey's law professor friend was Dan Richmond.