Recommend for pic 2 –
Delete "Remember that" and "But it's".
Change "send 50" to "send <1 planeload", "Marthas" to "Martha's" and "Vinyard" to "Vineyard".
OK to use blank space to right of plane for line 3.
Recommend for pic 2 –
Delete "Remember that" and "But it's".
Change "send 50" to "send <1 planeload", "Marthas" to "Martha's" and "Vinyard" to "Vineyard".
OK to use blank space to right of plane for line 3.